Feedback on evaluation

1. Remember this is a blog so you are expected to make the most of being able to create links to other sites and include images, so use them!
2. Your folders need to be organised more,

frontpage with blog address clearly written
main task
prelim task
evaluation print out
research, focus group and audience feedback print outs labelled

3. Link to results
4. Back up what you are saying eg I used emotive language- like what?
5 PEE- point- example- explanation

6. You have learnt how to blog as well as use CS3 and taking photos!
7. Print outs need to be done properly with no bits sliding off!
8. More research into existing audiences needed, remember men are the main consumers of music magazines, if you are targeting females how and why are you achieving this?
9. Most people needed much more audience feedback. As its a blog, you could even interview your focus group and put a link to a you tube video, the possiblilities are endless, use them!